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Post by perhapsormaybe on Jun 20, 2012 21:14:38 GMT -5
As per proboards updated rules, this is too mature of content for the board. Please either edit it or I will have to delete it.
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Post by charmcaster1 on Jun 21, 2012 5:54:05 GMT -5
I thought it better to delete it as I wasn't sure how I could have edited it to meet the rules.
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Post by charmcaster1 on Nov 16, 2012 13:25:54 GMT -5
On reflection I wish I had tried to edit the story since I was given the chance. I admit I was pushing at the boundaries, but I should have tried to work the story within the rules. I guess I was getting carried away. If anyone took offence I apologise. Would it be OK to try to write a version that does not involve any adult moments? Given the amount of comic violence out there these days I had assumed that that in itself would not be cause for violation. Bikini clad girls too I thought would not be too extreme for 13 year olds these days, but I admit I did allow tops to be removed quite explicitly which I see is going too far. Tops will stay on in future! I'll post a couple of starters to see if there is any reaction, and if the number of reads goes up I'll guess its OK provided I don't get too adult. Cheers!
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