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Post by datdude on Mar 16, 2010 21:19:45 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/u/778633/DatDudeBehold my works and tremble err I mean Im new here hi posting thsi in a few boards because well the new guy has to break some kind of board social fo-pa and I am the now guy so yea. Reviews welcome good bad and ugly.
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Post by Omni-X on Mar 19, 2010 0:20:01 GMT -5
10/10 for clashing egos. loved the ending. clockwork and pardox are same person. Good thought man keep up the good work
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Post by datdude on Mar 20, 2010 22:36:46 GMT -5
Thank you  I am love starved. |
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Post by Omni-X on Mar 21, 2010 0:18:40 GMT -5
haha you just need to advertise your work more. put it on more websites than low-stream like our site (no offense Mel..dont shoot me) But yah you have some real potential man
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Post by datdude on Mar 22, 2010 1:31:46 GMT -5
Popular fic sites outside ffn are rare, I'm an admin over at darkscribes.org and we are dieing for people. I came here because its all Evangelion with those people. If you know anyplace better link me.
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Post by Lady Lasa on Mar 23, 2010 3:54:11 GMT -5
Have you tried communities on LiveJournal? You can sometimes find good stuff there. Also, feel free to post your works here in addition to FFNet. A couple of us even post the chapters here before they go "fully public" on FFnet just for feedback and critique. That and I can't access FFnet at work so I'll have to wait until my next day off to read yours  |
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Post by DeepBlue on Mar 23, 2010 5:23:21 GMT -5
I've read your fics, DatDude. The story itself is pretty interesting, although the quotation marks are a little... well, I'm not sure...
Your version of Paradox is different. He's like an arrogant, but well-intentioned meddler who makes more trouble than necessary.
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Post by datdude on Mar 23, 2010 14:05:30 GMT -5
The quote marks them selves could be because i use open office ? no idea there.
As for Paradox Watch the doctor who " waters of mars " and you'll get his mindset.
@ Lasa Live journal I've looked through and only find dead communities. Then again im not a LJ guru
I might take you up on the posting works in progress here because im without a pre reader ATM.
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Post by datdude on Mar 24, 2010 2:20:53 GMT -5
OK taking a chance and using you people as a sounding board before the last chapter of Breaking the Sky goes live. Comment away
Edit
In retrospect posting the last chapter of a story here for review was probably not very kind to people on the board because they'd need to read the entire thing just to get everything. So I'm going to remove it and do another thread when I write my next story.
I've got Gwen in my head for some reason so expect it to be about her.
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Post by datdude on Aug 4, 2010 19:21:10 GMT -5
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Post by datdude on Aug 25, 2010 15:18:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2 of long hot summer is up.
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Post by datdude on Sept 27, 2010 14:15:24 GMT -5
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I am love starved. 
