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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 21:43:16 GMT -5
Read as Gwen goes through the months of pregnancy! Gwen/Kevin with a hint of Ben/Julie! Hope you like it!
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 21:44:12 GMT -5
Chapter 1
How am I going to tell him! Gwendolyn Tennyson, or should I say Gwendolyn Levin, thought. What was she going to say to her husband? She can't just blurt out "I'm having a baby!" ... You know... that wasn't a bad idea... Gwendolyn shock her head. No She scowlded to herself. I need to make it suttle... I don't want to scar him for life! Gwendolyn sighed in agrivation and ran a hand through her fiery red locks. Her face turned into delight when she finally got an idea. She then bolted out the door.
"Hmmm... That's quite a problem..." A 2 month pregnant Julie Yamamoto, or should I say Julie Tennyson, told Gwendolyn. "It's true you can't just blurt it out."
"How did you tell Ben about your baby?" Gwendolyn asked.
"Well," Julie started. "He just came home for patrol and I finally made up my mind to tell him once and for all. I sat him down and told him." Gwendolyn looked at Julie in shock.
"That's all?!"
"Well... no."
"What else happend?"
"Well... he fainted." Gwendolyn sniffled a snort. It's not every day you hear the 'hero of heros' faint over being told something. Well... this was life changing news though...
"What happend when he woke up?" She asked.
"He thought it was some dream."
"And...?"
"I told him again, this time he had a huge grin on his face and started yelling in joy." Gwendolyn smiled. He acted like a kid. It's been a while since he has done that.
"Well, do you think I should be suttle? Or just tell him?" Julie thought for a second.
"I think you should just tell him. You two love each other. I bet he'll be in shock for a little bit, but then he'd be so happy you wouldn't believe it."
"Your the best Jules!" Gwendolyn squeezed Julie and ran out the door.
-- Okay Gwendolyn just breathe, just breathe it will all be fine... Gwendolyn assured herself. It's not like he'll be mad... Oh my god. What if he's not ready? What if-?
Before Gwendolyn could finish that thought. The door opened. Gwendolyn looked at the door to see it was her husband. Kevin Levin. Just breath She thought once more before she walked up to her husband, grabbed his hand, and kissed him full on the lips. Kevin smiled and kissed her back. Gwendolyn pulled back and looked him straight in his eyes. She then turned away and pulled Kevin along with her. Kevin looked at her.
"Whats worng?" Kevin asked.
"Well... you might want to sit down." Gwendolyn tells him. Kevin sits down on the sofa and looks at his wife.
"Okay, what's worng love?" Kevin aksed with worry laced in his voice. If any one so dares lay a hand on Gwendolyn I'll-.
"I'm pregnant." Gwendolyn blurts out inturupting his thoughts. There gose being suttle...
Kevin just sat there in shock. Five minutes later Kevin still sat there. Gwendolyn started waving a hand in his face.
"Honey... Are you alright?" She asked hesiantly. Kevin suddenly grew a huge grin and lept in the air with a loud 'whoop'. He then picked Gwendolyn up and twrilled her around.
"I'm going to be a dad! Your going to be a mom!" He yelled. She started then put her down and put his forehead on hers. She stoped laughing.
"We're going to be parents..." He murmered. She looked up into his eyes. They smiled at each other and kissed each other.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 21:55:47 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Month 1- Sickness
In the room of Kevin and Gwendolyn Levin, you could see Kevin reach out for his wife. When his arm reached out to grab his wife, he didn't feel her. This caused him to open his eyes. All he saw was the blanket.
"Honey?" He called out. He was getting worried. He looked around the room to see the bathroom light on. He walked over to the bathroom to hear rushing water. He lightly knocks on the door.
"Gwen?" He calls. He heard some movement from the inside then the door opened to see Gwen, she turns off the bathroom lights and faces Kevin.
"Yes, love?" Gwen asks. Kevin then wraps his arms around her in an embrace.
"Don't scare me like that, I thought something was wrong." Kevin mummers. Gwen smiles at him. He was so sweet. Gwen stands on the tip of her toes to kiss Kevin on his forehead.
"It's okay. Just morning sickness." Gwen says. Kevin sniffs her breath.
"Really? Your breath smells minty fresh." Kevin says. Gwen kisses him on the lips.
"By the way, we need to go to the store and buy some more listerine." Gwen states with a cheeky grin. The walk to the bed and lie down. Kevin then puts his hand on her stomach.
"Your stomach's rock hard." He murmurs brushing a stray hair from her face with his other hand. Gwen just laughs.
"I know. I read it in one of the pregnancy books I bought. It's to protect the baby." Gwen says. Kevin smiles down at her then kisses her on the nose.
"We should get some sleep." Kevin murmurs putting his head in her hair breathing in her scent. Gwen snuggled closer to Kevin.
"Yeah... I'm tired... Let's hope I get used to the morning sickness..." That was the last thing Gwen said before her breath lightened. She fell asleep. Light snoring was then heard. Kevin fell asleep too. So in their master bed Gwen and Kevin Levin fell asleep. Not thinking about the months too come.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 21:57:01 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Month 2- Emotional
"Hmmm this looks cute..." Gwen mumbles as she puts a dark puple baby shirt in her cart. Both her and Kevin were buying things for the babies. Yes, babies. It turns out that their will be twins. It was too early to tell the gender but both Gwen and Kevin were elated about having two little bundles of joys in there house. Right now they were at 'Babies R Us' at the moment they split up to look for more things and decided to meet up at the center in the store.
Gwen was pushing her cart down the isle when she accidentally bumped into someone. That someone was a man about an inch taller then her and had black hair and blue eyes. He glared at Gwen.
"I'm soo sorry sir." Gwen appoligieses.
"You better be, bitch." The man snaps at her then went back on the phone walking away. She could hear him complain about her. Her vision started to get blurry as she walked to the center of the store with her half empty cart. She wiped her eyes.
'Why am I crying over this? I've been called worse...' Gwen thought to herself.
While she was walking, Kevin was waiting in the center of the store. When he saw Gwen he was about to call to get her attention but saw that she was crying. Kevin, who was worried, rushed to Gwen's side. He wraped a comforting arm around Gwen.
"What's worng, honey?" Kevin asked. He was really worried.
"I don't know... It's stupid Kevin... I'm just getting emotional that's all." She sniffled. Kevin just wrapped his other arm around her in an embrace.
"It's okay... just tell me, I promise I won't think it's stupid." He assured. Gwen smiled. He was just so understanding most of the time. So Gwen told him all about the guy who she accidentally bumped into and how he called her a bitch. Kevin scrunched his hand into two fists.
"I'll be right back, honey, just stay here." He murmers kissing her on the lips walking down the isle that Gwen just came from. Gwen watched his form go down the isle with a woried look. 'I hope he dosen't do anything rash...' Gwen thought to herself.
5 Minutes Later
Gwen was looking at a stuffed teddy bear when she felt an arm wrap around her and turn her around. She was then staring at coal/brown eyes of her husband, Kevin Levin. She smiles and kisses Kevin on the nose.
"Where were you?" She asked raising an eyebrow. Kevin just smiled and kissed her on the lips.
"Let's just say ... I was taking care of some 'buisness'." Kevin says mysteiously. Before she could say anything else he leads her to the cart.
"Come on, let's pay for our things." They then walk away to the caishier.
At the Levin home, Gwen and Kevin were on the couch with a blue blanket wraped around them. Kevin had his arm wraped around Gwen and Gwen was snugled against Kevin. They were watching tv when a news bulitin went on.
"Pleese if you've seen theese missing people please call 1-800-TELL." The tv buzzed then the tv showed a bunch of pictures that showed all the missing people. Gwen gaped at the tv and turned to Kevin. The reason she was gaping was because one of the missing people was the man she bumped into earlier.
"You didn't do anything bad to the man did you?" Gwen asked.
"Why do you think I did anything?" Kevin asks innocently. Gwen raises an eye brow at him. Kevin chuckles and shackes his head.
"I didn't do anything bad him... well too bad anyway." Kevin says. Gwen just looks at her husband.
"You shouldn't have done that Kevin, he didn't do anything bad " Gwen scowls at the man. Kevin just smirks and embraces her.
"Yes, he did, he messed with my wife." Gwen just gives Kevin a look and shakes her head. She then leaned into Kevin's chest.
"What am I going to do with you?" Gwen murmers causing Kevin to laugh.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 21:58:55 GMT -5
Chapter 4 Month 3- Family
At the moment, Gwendolyn was sitting on a rocking chair. 'Where?' you might ask, in the room of her future kids. The room was a pretty color, it was an ocean blue color. Two cribs were seperated one to the left side of the room and the other on the right. In the coner of the room was a little shelf with baby books on it like 'Good Night Moon' to 'Where The Wild Things Are'.
Gwendolyn was lounging on the rocking chair wearing a navy shirt and joging pants. You could see a baby bump appearing on her abdomen. She smiled warmly as she lay her hand on the baby bump. Inside of the baby bump was two budles of joys, her joys. Her's and Kevin's little joys.
Gwendolyn got up from the rocking chair and walked downstairs to the family room. When she got there she saw her husband, Kevin Levin, asleep on the couch with the tv still on. She sighed inaudibly. They were going to chose the name for there baby. She walked to the couch and sat down next to him. In his sleep, Kevin somehow wraped a protective arm around Gwendolyn. She smiles and leans against him.
"It has been confirmed that Gwendolyn Levin and Kevin Levin, one of the strongest hero's in the world are going to have a little bundle of joy. So far we aren't sure of what the gender of the baby will be but we'll be the first to tell about the first bundle of joy from the Levin couple." A male voice buzzed from the tv.
"And all we can say is that it's about time that those two love birds have a little chick in the nest." A female voic chimed gigling to her own little joke. Gwendolyn sighed. That's tv news for you. How did they find out? No one will ever know. Gwendolyn never liked news people always in others buisness and sometimes twisting words around.
"So, how do you think the news found out? Hm?" A female voice asked from behind. Gwendolyn quickly stood up at the familiar voice to see her friend, and cousin-in-law, Julie Tennyson. Julie, who was 5 months pregnent, slightly waded over to her friend and cousin-in-law.
"Did you get here by yourself?" Gwendolyn asked. Julie shook her head 'no' and threw her thumb to the door.
"No, Ben and Grampa Max came with, sorry for just barging in, we wanted to see how's it going?" Julie asked.
About 20 minutes later, everyone was in the family room driking milk and cookies. Yes, Kevin included. So, they talked about the past and the kids to come. They were all having a fantastic time. The one who was grinning the widest, to our surprise, was Kevin.
He's never had a family per say, his parents were always afraid of him and after a while decided to ditch him. So, he basically grew up on the streets. When he was 10 he met Ben and was then turned into a mutant from trying to absorb alien DNA. So, you can basically know what happend. Back then he probrally wouldn't believe that he'd have the privlage to have people let him call them familly. Neither would he think he'd have someone to love and have them love him back. He wraped an arm around his wife. Gwendolyn just leaned into Kevin. Kevin smiled, he was glad that he met Ben, even if he was turned into a mutant, it was worth it.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 22:00:11 GMT -5
Chapter 5 Month 4- Sleepy
"Gwen, wakey wakey, time to smell the roses." Kevin mumbles to his wife who was in his arms. Kevin and Gwendolyn Levin were still in the bed, compared to what time they usually wake up, it was late. It was 11 o'clock in the morning.
Gwen was wearing a ligt navy maternal dress and Kevin was wearing only grey sweat pants. Kevin and Gwen were in the middle of the bed and Kevin had his arms wraped around Gwen.
Gwen groaned and snugled closer to Kevin's chest.
"I want to sleep, Kevin." Gwen murmers snugling closer, if possisble, to Kevin. "Besides," Gwen added "When your pregnant you get more sleepy in the third to fourth month." Kevin smiles.
"Really?"
"Yup" Kevin smirks and puts his arms gentlly around Gwen to not harm the babies. Gwen was now showing more and it was obvious she was going to have a baby. It was now proof to the public that their were babies on the way from the ever growing bump.
"I could live with sleeping in a little longer." Kevin says. Placing his face in her hair. Smelling her scent, which was smelled like strawberry and sweat pea. Kevin always liked the way she smelled. Gwen smirked slightly and puts her face on his chest.
"I thought you would." Gwen mumbles.
Silence.
"So, how was your day yesterday?" Kevin murmers softly. He had to buy some more food. Aparently, hunger and cravings went together hand in hand.
"Fine, nothing important happend, do you know that the news knows about the babies?" Gwen grogily asked.
"Really?" Kevin asked.
So, Gwen and Kevin stayed in their bed for a few hours having one of there long conversations. Hey, it wasn't fluff and angst between them only, they also had lots in common and admired certain things about one another. It was just one of those relaxing days at home.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 22:05:14 GMT -5
Chapter 6 Month 5- First Kiss
Month 5- First Kiss
Gwendolyn sighed contently snuggling closer to her husband, Kevin Levin, who was fast asleep. In his sleep, he pulled Gwendolyn closer with the hands that he had around her waist. It was 4:28 in the morning. She's checked, with the limited movement she had caused by Kevin's arms and the ever growing baby bump. Gwendolyn smiled and swiftly moved her hand to her stomach. She had life within her. It was all so exciting. The babies I mean. Her smile then turned to a frown. Both, her and Kevin, haven't thought of names for the babies. They couldn't just call them 'the babies'. That reminder her. She needed to talk about names for the babies.
Now that she though of it. She's been through so much. Helping Ben with the omnitrix, finding out her powers while thinking it was magic, fighting Hex on multiple occasions, and being pregnant was what she was going through now. The best though, was her relationship with Kevin Levin. She could remember what started it all. Their first kiss. Sure, she kissed him on the cheek, but we're talking on the lips here. Oh, how she could remember it like it was only just yesterday...
"Soooo... when do you think they'll let us out? I mean, we stopped fighting an hour ago." Gwen chided. Both her and Kevin were locked in a bare room. The reason behind it was that Ben and Julie had locked them in so they could solve their little quarrel ... or to give them some peace and quiet.
At the time, Gwen was 16 and Kevin was 17.
Gwen had her orange hair up to her waist. She was wearing a light purple tee with a dark purple tank over. The shirt stopped mid-thigh and she wore slim blue jeans. On her feet she wore dark purple sneakers. She also, grew a few inches making her about a little over five feet.
Kevin refused to go to the barber shop for reasons unknown. Anytime you would ask his face would take on a blank look then he would shudder and excuse himself. Since he wouldn't go his hair was about an inch or two about his shoulder. He had grown a few inches and if Gwen was standing at full height she would reach his chin. He wore a black shirt that said in white capital letters "I'LL ROCK YOUR WORLD." and plain blue jeans.
Kevin shrugged. "Do you think we just blast our way out?" Kevin asked. Gwen lifted an eyebrow at his question.
"Since when did you ask?"
"Don't want me to ask?"
Gwen shook her head. "I'm not complaining. Just curious." She then sighed and got up. "We'll I'm gonna blast the door down, I don't think anyone will really care, we're just at the training ground." She then walked to the door, but then tripped on a nail that grabbed to the bottom of her jeans on her way to the door. She closed her eyes and put her hands in front of her, mentally and slightly physically preparing for the fall. But the fall never came. Gwen opened her eyes to see she was being held by two strong muscular arms and hovering about a foot off the ground. She then turned over to be face to face with Kevin.
Her heart started to race at being so close to him. She didn't know it, but his heart started to race too. Maybe Ben's jokes on how their sexual tension could be cut with a knife, wasn't so wrong know. And before either of them could comprehend the situation. Their lips lightly touched.
"What thinking about Gwen?" Kevin's voice cut though her memory. She lifter her clover green eyes to see meet Kevin's coal/brown eyes. She moved her head up and kissed Kevin on the lips.
"Just thinking of the past. That's all, love."
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 19, 2009 22:10:00 GMT -5
Chapter 7 Month 6- Names
"Um. Kevin. I'm not to sure about the names you picked..."
"Why not?"
"They all rhyme with you name hun. Well, except this one... 'Kevin Jr.', seriously?"
"What? They're fine names."
"Yeah, but this list is only names for guys..."
"Yeah, it's gonna be a guy."
"What if it's a girl?"
"..."
"Got you there didn't I?"
"Oh shut it, Gwen."
"Fine, fine, ruin my fun."
"So, let me see your list."
"Fine here."
"... You've got to be kidding me."
"What?!"
"Their all too girlie."
"What do you mean by that?"
"Seriously, 'Cynthia', 'Angel', 'Tina'?"
"Oh yeah. Coming from the guy who wants to give a kid who's name rhymes with their last name."
"Hey, 'Kevin Jr.' didn't"
"Yeah, but we're not naming the baby that... If one of them is a boy."
"Fine then what about 'Len', his name will rhyme with him mom's side of the family."
"I don't really think-"
"Oh! What about 'Den'? He'll even have a room named after him!"
"Kevin"
"Oh, what about 'Ten' he'll be named after a number!"
"Kevin"
"Oh, what about-"
"Okay! I get it what about... Devlin."
"I thought you didn't want to give our son a name to rhyme with our last name."
"I'll make an exception this once."
"What if his twin is a boy as well?"
"Then, will name our other son... Oliver."
"Oliver?"
"What's wrong with that name?"
"Nothing, nothing."
"Well, what do you want to name our daughter if we have a daughter?"
"Well, what about ...Jaylynn?"
"Hm... I like it. Your better at picking out girl names then boy names, did you know that?"
"Gwendolyn"
"Fine. Second time you've ruined my fun."
"Weird. It's usually the other way around."
"Har-dy har har."
"Anyway, what do you want to name another girl, if we had one?"
"I thought you said one was 'definitely' going to be a boy."
"No. I didn't."
"Yeah, you did. On the phone with Ben last night."
"...How on Earth did you hear that?"
"I was only a few feet away from you."
"..."
"Wow."
"Shut it. What would you name her?"
"Okay. What about Tiffany?"
"Eh, no way."
"Well, what about... India?"
"India?"
"Yeah, I wanted something exotic."
"So, your setting our daughter to be a pole dancer?"
"A simple 'No' would suffice."
"I know."
"Fine, what about Adrianne?"
"I actually like it."
"...Really?
"What, you don't?"
"No, I do. But that's kinda a shocker. I thought you wouldn't like it."
"I'm a shocking person."
"Even though you are, we can flirt latter."
"Aw. I like it when we flirt."
"Stop the pouting. I said later, not never."
"Fine."
"Okay so. If we have a boy we're definitely naming him Devlin, if the other twin's a boy then we're naming him Oliver."
"And if we have a girl we're naming her Jaylynn and if we have another one we're naming her Adrianne."
"Great. We came up with names."
"Yeah, and it only took two hours."
"Details, details."
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Post by perhapsormaybe on Mar 19, 2009 22:23:05 GMT -5
A few notes here and there - most women don't find out they're pregnant until they're at least one month (or further) along. I think I was 6 weeks pregnant when I found out. And at 6 months, they'd know the gender, unless the babies were too far curled up or had their legs crossed (even then, the tech can often give a good estimation of what the baby might be). I'm with Gwen on the mood swings....I yelled about very stupid things back in December, and I was constantly crying while driving (not the smartest things to be doing simultaneously).
I do like this story, but you switch tenses. Most writers go for the past tense "she said" verses present tense "she says", because it tends to flow better. It works best if you keep the same tense throughout the story.
Now to the relationships....ah, the only way an emotional Gwen isn't out of character. Pregnant Gwen seems pretty realistic to me. Great job there. I think it's great Kevin is so excited...and you're right, he does seem the type of guy to insist that they'd have a boy. I like how you said Ben had fainted over the news Julie was pregnant. I bet he would....I'm sure Julie had an emergency smoothie on standby for him, though.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 20, 2009 6:04:33 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply and yeah, I know there are some mistakes written here. Considering some new stuff, this is considered kind of old. I think out of the 8 stories I made for Ben 10, this one was about my second. Really? That's when you found out? I never really knew that. Most of this stuff I had some help on from some friends on DA. Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 20, 2009 6:14:46 GMT -5
Chapter 8 Month 7- Kenneth Maxwell Tennyson
Bellwood General Hospital, Monday, 11:36PM
In the hollow halls of the local Bellwood hospital. You could see the hero of heroes. Benjamin Tennyson. Or as most called him Ben. He had a wonderful life. His cousin Gwendolyn, or Gwen, was married to the love of her life Kevin Levin. They were also super hero's, they were on the top five super hero's list. Gwen was also expecting children, for which Ben couldn't wait to be an uncle. Well, technically Gwen's kids would be his first cousins, but they'd call him uncle, and he'd treat them like it.
Then there was his lovely, beautiful wife Julie Tennyson. She was also expecting child, and at that moment. She was in labor. Thus the hero of heroes was having a panic attack. Thoughts passed through his head. What if something happened? What if the omnitrix altered his DNA and it messed with their child? What if Julie die-? He couldn't finish that thought. He sighed.
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Gwen watched her cousin with worried eyes. She looked to her left to see her husband asleep in the chair beside her. When Julie's water broke, all of them were at the mall enjoying a nice day out...
Bellwood Mall Food Court, Monday, 7:46PM
"So, what do you guys want?" Kevin asked. Ben looked over at his wife and cousin who were talking seemingly not noticing what Kevin was asking.
"Julie, what do you want to eat?" Ben repeated wrapping his arm around his wife. This got her attention.
"Hmmm... Maybe pizza. What about you Gwen?" Julie answered.
"Pizza sounds awesome." Gwen replied. Kevin then stood up.
"Pizza it is." He then strolled over to the pizza counter.
"So," Julie started looking over at Gwen. "What are you going to name you kids?"
"Well, if we have one girl we're defiantly going to name her Jaylynn if the other's a girl we're going to name her Adrianne, if we have one boy his name's going to be Devlin if the other's a boy too his name's going to be Oliver." Gwen answered.
"How long did that take?" Ben teased.
"Only two hours. What's it to you?" Kevin asked sitting down with the pizza. "Half meat lovers the the other half vegetarian lovers." Gwen then leaned over and kissed Kevin on the lips.
"Thanks for the pizza, Kevy." Gwen thanked taking one slice of the vegetarian lovers and taking a bite.
"Yeah, thanks, 'Kevy'." Ben said taking a bite out of his pizza which was covered in meat. Kevin looked like he was about to explode but when Gwen kissed him on the cheek was suddenly calm eating his slice of pizza with 10 different meat on it. Julie giggled at the sight, Beauty really did calm the beast. Just when Julie had two bites of her pizza she felt a sudden kick in her stomach and looked down. She froze.
"Julie, what's wrong?" Ben asked looking over to his wife.
"I-I-I think my water just broke." Julie stuttered. [/i]
After Julie admitted that her water broke. It all happened in a blur. They were rushing to the hospital, Ben was spazzing out but kept a calm facade and was coaching Julie with the exercises breathing they learned in their classes. Kevin almost swerved into a car... several times. Once they got to the hospital, Julie was sitting on a wheel chair. Surprisingly, no one was really helping. So all of them were trying to convince the receptionist, a lovely lady chewing bubble gum while high lighting things. It was really funny once Gwen thought back on it...
"My wife is in labor! Why isn't anyone helping?!" Ben asked. The lady just looked dully at Ben, not really taking notice on who these people really were. She just popped her bubble gum.
"You need to sign the sheet I handed you, Mister. I've told you this already." The lady replied.
"Our friend is in labor, and her contractions are seven minutes apart! You have to do something!" Gwen complained.
"Like I told your friend, you have to-" But the lady was interrupted by a livid Julie.
"Listen, lady! I'm the one who's in labor! I'm the one in pain!" Julie hissed grabbing the front of the receptionist shirt. "Now for the love of all that's good in this world, you will get Dr. Tina! Got it?!" The receptionist just nodded afraid of the woman in labor. Julie then let go but gasped in pain as she leaned back in her wheel chair.
After that, the receptionist, in fear of Julie pulling another stunt like that, when they rolled Julie to the room all Kevin, Gwen and Ben could do was wait. At first Ben was allowed in the room to squeeze Julie's hand and kiss her on the forehead but then Dr. Tina kicked Ben out because her cervix was at 7 centimeters. So, five minute's later, Ben was pacing back and forth not looking anyone in the eye.
"She's gonna be fine, Ben. Julie's a strong woman. She won't go down without a fight." Gwen said. Ben stopped pacing a second and looked at Gwen.
"I know, Gwen, but I can't help worrying. I love her." Ben admitted. Before Gwen could respond. A nurse peeked her head out the door.
"Mr. Tennyson, would you like to see you wife and baby boy?" She asked. It should've been a rhetorical question. Ben just walked toward the door and went inside. The nurse then turned her attention to Gwen and Kevin.
"Would you like to see them too?" The nurse asked. Gwen smiled and nodded. The nurse smiled back. "I'll leave the door open." Then went back inside. Gwen then turned her attention to her slumbering husband and shoved him lightly.
"Kevin, the baby's here," Gwen said. Kevin groaned but opened his eyes.
"Ours or your cousin's?" Kevin asked groggily. Gwen just rolled her eyes.
"Ben's. Now come on." Gwen dragged Kevin into the delivery room. When they got inside, they saw Julie on a cot to the left with monitors near by. Julie looked like a mess with sweat all over her skin. She looked like she raced an XLR8 and it looked like their was a tie. Ben was sitting down next to Julie with an arm wrapped around her shoulders and was petting her long hair soothingly. They were both staring down at the little bundle in Julie's arm covered in a light green blanket. (Me: I can not make the baby blue. I think that if they figured out who Ben was, they'd make it green or black. But I don't think that anyone would want their baby wrapped in a black blanket... Okay, Kevin might be an exception to that.)
Julie then noticed the two new figure's in the room and smiled a small smile at the, Gwen suddenly noticing how tired she must have been.
"Do you guys want to meet you knew little, nephew?" Julie asked. Gwen and Kevin walked over to them and looked down at the little baby.
"Aw, he's adorable. What did you name him?" Gwen cooed.
"Kenneth Maxwell Tennyson." Ben answered with a big grin.
"And to think, something as cute as him is Ben's son." Kevin teased looking down in wonder at the new slapped her husband on the arm. Ben just ignored the comment, he wasn't going to let Kevin ruin this moment. So in the hospital room, the gang stared down in wonder at the new baby. Kenneth Maxwell Tennyson.
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So. What do you think? Did I make it to sappy or anything? I was thinking about having Julie in the chapter and then I realized 'OMG! I forgot! About little Kenny!' So, I had to make this. I know Kenny doesn't really have Julie's skin color or anything, but I figured that since, future Ben altered time, he could've distracted them with the cake when something happened which could have involved Kevin and how he could still of've been in the null void, and Gwen could've not helped Ben thinking Ben would ask her out if Kevin wasn't there to help her understand his situation a bit... Okay reading to much into it.
ANYWAY! Please review!
-Alexa
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Post by perhapsormaybe on Mar 20, 2009 11:49:20 GMT -5
Technical issue - they don't kick the father out of the room for a vaginal delivery, often not even for a C-section (Unless he gets woozy...my dad had to leave because he can't stand the site of blood when my sister was born...he wasn't allowed in when I was born because of a lot of issues).
*laughs* I LOVE the "And to think, something as cute as him is Ben's son." line. That was a perfect Kevin right there. and Julie was a very scary in-labor woman, which was pretty funny, too. I like this a lot, actually. ^_^ Keep writing.
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Post by cuteinpurple on Mar 21, 2009 23:37:57 GMT -5
Yea, I kind of guessed that AFTER I wrote that, but I didn't want to change it because it flew together and I kind of wanted to write a worried Ben in this story. Well, a way more worried Ben.
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Post by fierysue on Mar 22, 2009 2:08:45 GMT -5
I actually reviewed this at deviantart... But I'll tell you I liked it again...
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Post by takashirika on Apr 20, 2009 23:03:09 GMT -5
I also read this on da, I thought it was really good. My favourite part is still Ben fainting. hehhehheh
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